The Diamond Book

For writing today we had to copy a story out of our book and paste it into a blog post. What I did well in this story is use plenty of ideas, what I need to work on is organising sentences and using punctuation.

The Diamond Book

It was a bright, frosty morning outside and Debbie went outside for a walk over the Pier, but when she got to the end of the Pier there was a book. It was not any kind of book... a diamond book! Debbie picked it up and asked everyone nearby if it was there book but no one said yes, so he took it and went back home.

When he got back home he opened the book but before he could even read a single word of it a random guy came out of nowhere and snatched it out of his hands and ran. Debbie chased him down around the block four times until Debbie got a stitch he couldn't run anymore and went back home.

Debbie couldn't sleep all night he just kept thinking about the book it was so beautiful he had an hour sleep and when he woke up he was still thinking about it so he tried to distract himself by gaming for hours, baking a cake, reading a different book, had a swim at the beach but nothing worked so he retracted his steps to where he got a stitch to see if any diamonds might of fell off the book and there was but only one. He went to sell the diamond for $1,500 but then he wanted to show off that he had a diamond and his friends didn't so he kept it and showed all of his friends.

After showing all his friends he seen the exact same guy at a park that had the book and lucky he was carrying the book with him so he sneakily followed him and took the book from his hands then he ran back home since the guy was following him he went to his house locked the door so he couldn't get in and called the cops but they were both sent to jail Debbie was sent to jail for stealing it without asking the last person on the Pier and the other guy was sent to jail because he stole it off Debbie.